tonight i can't see timp
after friday i won't see you, or you
.....or even you
tonight i can't even see tomorrow, let alone anything that's
supposed to come next
i'm going to miss clouds that sit on the mountains
what used to be 4 miles away is now 4000
and soon that will change to just a 1000
but a thousand will never look as good as 0 felt
and i'm trying not to be scared, because i hear that the ocean is
pretty blue
but then again, so were you.
tonight i'm trying hard to picture tomorrow, and the next day
i wonder if you're doing the same
i wonder if the numbers 0 and 4000 are a little closer tonight
This made me a little sad, but in the best of ways
ReplyDeleteIt was beautiful.
Thank tou
Thank tou too
Deletethis is beautiful. honestly, i'm a little speechless. thank you for always being honest. (I still can't get over the whole thing you did with the numbers and the 0 and 4000 and wow)
ReplyDeleteMath and geography and poetry made a baby.
ReplyDeleteI miss your writing. Also, remember how we were in the same class but I hardly said a word? I regret that.
ReplyDeleteYou'll always be one of the greats.
saw your name on twitter today and it made me think of this comment & how much I appreciated it but never said anything. thanks trevor, paris was so great and i still miss it!
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